Lighting for Black and White Part 3

For the third photo in this series I went for a kind of clamshell lighting and one light for the background. Setup and camera settings are below. I really don't think I have the right kind of modifiers for this type of setup. Because of the way the Apollo is made you can't really get a good tilt on the softbox. I suppose if I had a boom arm I could make it work better. Here is the setup.

I don't really like the way the light falls on the face in this one. I did do some dodging and burning in the edited version to improve on this. I am definitely going to have to revisit this setup with some modifications.

Below are the camera settings.